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    Re: Veganarchy

    This update cemented VanCleve as my favourite character because that amount of crazy is basically walking plot development. Also, the ending is pretty interesting :o

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    Re: Veganarchy

    I have certainly been enjoying reading your updates! I thought maybe I should point that you seem to have started one sentence and finished a different one in the middle of the 4th paragraph of part 8. I got the intended meaning, but it's a kind of glaring error in an otherwise well-edited piece.

    So far I think my favorite characters are the duo of Spittler and Dickson. The specific way in which their personalities spectacularly fail to be compatible has so much comedic potential.


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    Re: Veganarchy

    Had to revise the intro for a project in one of my classes, so here's the updated story (I only really changed the first and last paragraphs):

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    Re: Veganarchy

    This can't end on a cliff hanger. I need to know who survived. Was it the thief? The janitor? Floyd?

    I meant to mention this earlier, but I like how the Veganarchy shifts from different character perspectives. While the thief's story of revenge is by far my favorite, VanCleve's post-campaign life is just hysterical.
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    Re: Veganarchy

    Unfortunately I had too much work so I'm not going to win NaNo, but I like this story a lot so I'm definitely going to keep it going. All I need is some actual time to write... which probably isn't going to happen for about three weeks unfortunately. This is definitely something I'm sticking with, I like it too much to not keep going with it and I guess that's the true spirit of NaNo; the goal isn't the 50000 words but to try to be creative and have a fun time.

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