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    Re: Vesti and Lauren's Interdimensional Investigations (A CYOA)

    Quote Originally Posted by SockOutTheWindow View Post
    Let's go talk to Lauren. See if she actually is injured like Glass said.
    Yes. Tell Glass you're doing this just to bug him.
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    Re: Vesti and Lauren's Interdimensional Investigations (A CYOA)

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    I usually say something witty and clever here but I can't think of anything. How sad.

    Talk: Magnifi: Moving the Body

    You turn to Magnifi and ask him another question "Would it be possible for the killer to have moved the body from another location to the security room?" Magnifi looks rather disgruntled that you're still here. He answers "I suppose that's a possibility. But you would need solid evidence to suggest that that's actually true. Also, I'm not sure while you're talking to me about this. You're still a detective yourself." You shout "You have no proof of that!" The detective stares at you in confused silence. You decide to ignore his opinions.

    You begin to wonder aloud about who could have a motivation to frame Lauren. By this I mean you start shouting all of your thoughts incredibly loudly, as close to Magnifi's ear as possible. He kicks you out of the security room. However, it is not a total loss. Among your recollections you decide that no one you were aware of had a motive against Lauren, especially considering she wasn't the one who died. However, anyone could have had a motive that simply isn't obvious without further investigation.

    You begin considering where to go next. To determine this, we'll count up the votes. We have two votes to visit the Chief's office, two votes for the detention center room place, and one vote for the medical room. That's a two-way tie. Since I don't want to do a recount I'll just boot Vesti over to the Chief's Office anyway because why not.

    Move: Chief's Office

    Date: Saturday, October 21st, 2015. Time: 9:10 AM Location: Police Department, Chief's Office.

    You head down the hall freaking out about all of your suspicion's being correct. Eventually you make your way inside. The chief's office is simply a room with a standard wooden desk. It also has a filing cabinet and other boring stuff like that. On the left wall hangs two violins and a viola and two celloes lean against the wall. One of the violins is broken and lying on the floor. On the right wall is another door. You take a few steps into the room when the aforementioned door opens loudly and a man walks in. He shouts "It's Vesti! Good to see you! What brings you here?" A man stands in front of the doorway. Unlike Detective Glass the chief wears a red plaid shirt and pants. He is perhaps somewhere in his early forties, and he has silver hair that looks faily normal except for a part of it that sweeps off the left side of his head and upwards, like a wing or a gust of wind. You reply "I'm here to investigate the murder of Officer Bajj, Chief." The man responds "Oh, please. Enough with your formalities! Just call me Antonio Bridges! As for the investigation, why are you even investigating here? Isn't the crime scene the security room?" You explain "Of course Ch... Antonio, but we've found evidence that suggests that the body may have been moved from this office to the security room." "Ah, I understand." Chief Bridges replies "Feel free to look around all you want! Just... please be careful with my instruments... I don't want another one broken." {Antonio Bridges added to Profiles}

    Investigation: Chief's Office
    Examine:
    Instruments, Broken Violin, Desk, Filing Cabinet, Right Door, Documents, Poster.
    Talk:
    Antonio Bridges
    Magnifi Glass
    Officer Bajj
    Chief
    Instruments
    Move:
    Detention Center
    Medical Room
    Security Room
    Lobby
    Present:
    To Antonio Bridges
    What will you do now?
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    Re: Vesti and Lauren's Interdimensional Investigations (A CYOA)

    Present Antonio your police Badge.

    Then examine the broken violin, and ask Antonio why it's broken, and such.

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    Re: Vesti and Lauren's Interdimensional Investigations (A CYOA)

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    Present Antonio your police Badge.

    Then examine the broken violin, and ask Antonio why it's broken, and such.
    You forgot favorite color.
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    Re: Vesti and Lauren's Interdimensional Investigations (A CYOA)

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    Present Antonio your police Badge.

    Then examine the broken violin, and ask Antonio why it's broken, and such.
    Also take a look at the left shark right door.
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    Re: Vesti and Lauren's Interdimensional Investigations (A CYOA)

    Spoiler: A journey of a thousand words starts with a couple quotes! 


    Everyone asks about the broken violin oh boy.

    Examine: Poster

    You take a look at the poster. It is a poster showing some kind of strings symphony. According to the list of performers Antonio was a member at some point. It doesn't seem to be particularly important. (That poster wasn't in the original overview of the room because I just decided to add it to the end of the examine list when I was making that. If an item on the Examine list isn't mentioned in the room, then that's probably because it's not important.

    Present: Police Badge: Antonio Bridges

    You show Bridges the amazing wonder of nature that is your Police Badge. He says "Your police badge? Why are you showing that to me? Are you turning it in?" "Of course not!" you shout "Why would I resign from my job?" "How should I know! There are numerous reasons! You may have found a better offer, or had trouble with the other officers, or perhaps you got tired of me playing Mozart throughout the entire day! There are many reasons." (I suppose at least one of those is applicable to my current situation...)

    Talk: Antonio Bridges: Favorite Color

    You ask Antonio "What's your favorite color?" The chief appears to be deep in thought for a minute. Eventually he replies "Hmm... Probably orange. Maybe brown. What about you Vesti? What's YOUR favorite color?" You reply "Umm... Green, I guess..." "AHA! That must explain why you wear green all the time, right?" "Uh... Yeah..." (Briliant deduction, chief)

    Examine: Right Door

    You walk to the right door and open it. You look outside and ask "Where does this door leave?" Bridges replies "That's the practice range! You know, obstacle courses and firing ranges and stuff. You came out there a week ago, silly!" You sigh "Oh... That's right. I suppose I did." Antonio happily continues "Don't you remember? That was where you tripped on-" "Alright!" you interject "That's enough of this discussion for now."

    Talk: Antonio Bridges: Officer Bajj

    You ask the chief "What did you know about the victim?" He explains "Officer Bajj? He was a really good officer. He was on the force for a long time. I even worked with him when I was still an officer. It's a shame that he passed away." You ask "Do you know of anyone with a motive to kill him?" "Not really. Unless some police officer wanted more power in the police department, but that seems somewhat unlikely..."

    Talk: Antonio Bridges: Magnifi Glass

    You suddenly shout "It's CLEAR to me that that detective Glass guy is BREAKING my mind! You need to FIRE him and stuff." Chief Bridges is knocked back by the force of your terrible puns, but somehow continues anyway. "Well, he may be somewhat of a jerk, but he's one of the best detective on our force. He's solved many cases during his long career. If anyone can solve this incident, he can." You cross your arms in annoyance. Bridges continues "You're a great detective too, Vesti! It's just that Magnifi Glass has more experience and-" You interrupt "Alright let's just move on."

    Examine: Broken Violin

    You take a look at the violin. Everything above the fingerboard is alright, but the bottom is completely destroyed. Between the two C-bouts is a large gash seperating the bottom and top of the violin from each other. All of the strings have snapped. In essence, the violin is now in two pieces. However, the top of the fingerboard, as well as the peg box and scroll, appear unharmed. The bridge of the violin has deteched and is lying on the floor. You ask "How did this violin get broken?" Magnifi says "It's quite a shame isn't it? I was going to play a sad nocturne on my violin in its honor but then I remembered it was broken. I haven't used my other violin for a few months, so it's probably really out of tune. I guess I'll have to fix that at some point soon anyway." You reply "That's a really sad story, but it doesn't answer my question." Antonio continues "Oh, right! To be honest, I'm not sure how it broke. Yesterday night I briefly left the office, and when I came back that violin was broken! The most likely possibility is that the hook it was on broke and it simply fell, but I don't know for sure." {Broken Violin added to Evidence}

    Investigation: Chief's Office
    Examine:
    Instruments, Desk, Filing Cabinet, Documents.
    Talk:
    Evidence Room
    Antonio Bridges
    Magnifi Glass
    Officer Bajj
    Instruments
    Move:
    Detention Center
    Medical Room
    Security Room
    Lobby
    Present:
    To Antonio Bridges
    What will you do now?

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    Re: Vesti and Lauren's Interdimensional Investigations (A CYOA)

    Take the obviously unimportant poster. It might be important later!

    Then examine and talk about the instruments.
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    Re: Vesti and Lauren's Interdimensional Investigations (A CYOA)

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    Take the obviously unimportant poster. It might be important later!

    Then examine and talk about the instruments.
    Yesh.
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    Re: Vesti and Lauren's Interdimensional Investigations (A CYOA)

    Examine the hook the violin was on to make sure it's really broken.

    Then talk about the Evidence Room, as well as the man in charge himself, Antonio. Make sure to flatter him a lot.

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    Re: Vesti and Lauren's Interdimensional Investigations (A CYOA)

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    You steal the poster and then laugh maniacally before stuffing it in your pocket. Whether or not it is used as evidence remains to be seen. Since I have little of the confrontation planned out, it could end up that way. {Symphony Poster added to Evidence}

    You also try to change your favorite color but fail.

    Examine: Instruments

    You take a look at the instruments. The cellos are simply leaning against the wall. They have a thingy that prevents them from falling though. The viola and violins are simply hanging off of hooks by a string attached under the scroll. Sure enough the string connected to the broken violin is snapped. Perhaps that's why it fell. Antonio starts shouting "Ah so you've taken an interest to my instruments have you." "Um... Not really..." you reply, but Antonio doesn't listen. "Now that cello is one I used way back in sixth grade when I first began playing! I bought the others later. As for the viola, I've began learning how to play it recently. I plan to learn to play a double bass as well some day." "That's very interesting." you interrupt before he can go on another tangent. "But I have another question. Would you allow me to forensically investigate that broken violin?" "Sure." he replies "It's not playable now. But you would need some forensic equipment to do so, and you don't appear to have any. There's no here in the office either..." (Perhaps Lauren Tehra still has some equipment I could use.)

    Examine: Filing Cabinet

    You ask "Could I examine your filing cabinet and some of those documents?" The chief replies "Sure. I doubt you'd find anything of use though." You take a look at the filing cabinet. It is a fairly standard cabinet, but there is nothing of use inside. To the left of the filing cabinet is a wastebasket containing a pair of white gloves. You decide to take them because you can. {White Gloves added to Evidence}

    Examine: Documents

    You take a look at the documents on the desk. One in particular looks notable. You show it to Antonio. "What is this document about?" Antonio shouts "Taking an interest in the police chief's work, I see! Perhaps you're hoping to be promoted to this position." "I'm not actually." you mumble "Could you just answer the question?" "FINE!" the chief takes the paper and looks it over. "Ah, this paper. This is detailing some thefts in the evidence room." "Thefts?" "Yes. For about two months evidence from past cases has been dissapearing from the Evidence Room. We're currently trying to figure out who's doing it, but due to the lack of security cameras in the evidence room, we're having problems." "Why aren't there security cameras in the evidence room?" you ask. Chief Bridges replies "Because I keep forgetting to put them in the budget." (I'm not certain this man is qualified for his job.) {Evidence Room Thefts added to Evidence}

    Talk: Antonio Bridges: Absence

    "You said you left your office yesterday. When was this?" Antonio explains "I left the office at around 10:20. I came back at around 10:30." "Why did you leave your office?" "I had to use the restroom." "That figures." you mumble.

    Talk: Antonio Bridges: Antonio Bridges

    "So how did you become the chief of police?" Antonio replies "Well when the last chief retired, he hired me for the job. I was a detective back then, and I had already proven myself to be fairly capable. So I agreed." "Well, you are indeed faily capable." "Well the same could easily be said for you Vesti! Besides, I'm not technically a detective anymore." "That may be true, but you must have been a fairly capable detective to reach this position." "Well of course. That's what I just said." "Oh, right." you mutter. The chief continues "I'm beginning to question whether you really are that capable. Perhaps you should take that test again..." (Well the conversation was a disaster.)

    Investigation: Chief's Office
    Examine:
    Desk.
    Talk:
    Evidence Room
    Antonio Bridges
    Magnifi Glass
    Officer Bajj
    Instruments
    Move:
    Detention Center
    Medical Room
    Security Room
    Lobby
    Present:
    To Antonio Bridges
    What will you do now?
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    Re: Vesti and Lauren's Interdimensional Investigations (A CYOA)

    First, name the box above the stuff "Planet".
    *asplodes*

    Go to detention and ask Lauren for some equipment that you could use. Then examine the deskadooble.
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    Examine da Desk and talk to da Tony.
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    Re: Vesti and Lauren's Interdimensional Investigations (A CYOA)

    Spoiler: Q is for Quotes and Quail. 


    You try to name the box above the stuff "Planet" but I have no idea what box the action is referring to so you fail.

    "Perhaps the killing had something to do with the thefts? And Officer Bajj found something that proved the theif's identity and then the killer silenced him?" Antonio appears to be deep in thought, and soon he replies "That could be the case. Too bad we can't ask Officer Bajj right?" "Yeah I suppose that would make things easier..." Antonio laughs "What if we had some kind of way to channel his spirit and ask him a bunch of questions? That would be really convenient!" You sigh "Antonio, I'm afraid that imagining new and psysically impossible investigation methods isn't going to help much." The chief replies "Don't be such a stick in the mud, Vesti! I'm just trying to lighten the mood!" (I don't think lightening the mood is really appropriate in this situation...)

    Examine: Desk

    You take a look at the desk. It is a normal desk. There's one of those name plate stick things on it with Antonio's name, as well as a few writing utensils. There appear to be numerous official documents on the desk, but upon closer examination it turns out that most of them are just pieces of sheet music. One corner of the desk has cleaning supplies and a rag on it. there doesn't appear to be much else of note.

    Also I apparently forgot to cross out Antonio Bridges' talk option in the last post but whatever. His name is also not written under "Talk" and italized. I'm clearly really good at this.

    Present: Antonio Bridges: Lauren Tehra

    You show Lauren Tehra's image to Antonio. He appears to become sad "What a shame. She was such a good investigator. It's a shame that she had to commit murder like this." "You appear to be ignoring the fact Lauren Tehra's guilt hasn't even been proven yet." "Well she does appear to be the most likely suspect." "Just because she's the most 'likely suspect' doesn't mean she's guilty either!" Antonio suddenly begins playing the E string on one of his violins as loudly as possible, for no obvious reason. (My ears may hurt, but at least that conversation is over.)

    Present: Antonio Bridges: Officer Bajj

    You follow this up by shoving a picture of Officer Bajj into Antonio's face. "What was your history with the victim." you ask. Antonio begins explaining "Well, we both joined the force at the same time! In that time, we became friends, and eventually I moved up to the rank of detective, while he stayed as a police officer. Occasionally the two of use would work together on cases and- Wait, why am I telling you all this." You mumble "Umm... because I asked..." "This barely has anything to do this case! You're trying to distract me so you can steal one of my cellos, aren't you." You sigh "Um... no... why would I-" "Be lucky I'm a merciful chief!" he interjects "I'll let you off the hook for now. But if you try this again you'll be out of a job!" (I'm not sure how he expects me to sneak a cello out of that door in the first place...)

    Move: Detention Center

    You decide that you're tired of talking to the chief. You shout "Alright that was fun see ya later BYEEEEEEE" over your shoulder and then depart from the room. You turn left and head for the detention center.

    Date: Saturday, October 21st, 2015. Time: 9:50 AM Location: Police Department, Detention Center.

    You find yourself back in the Detention Center. Lauren Tehra is currently sitting in a chair reading some kind of book. She looks up upon hearing the door open "Hello again, Vesti! What brings you here?" "I managed to stall your arrest for a little longer, and I came back to ask you a few questions." "Well that's nice. What would you like to ask?"

    Investigation: Detention Center
    Examine:
    The World.
    Talk:
    Lauren Tehra
    Magnifi Glass
    The Wound
    Antonio Bridges
    Forensic Supplies
    Move:
    Chief's Office
    Medical Room
    Security Room
    Lobby
    Present:
    To Lauren Tehra
    What will you do?
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    Investigate the world, then talk about the wound and forensic supplies.
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    Re: Vesti and Lauren's Interdimensional Investigations (A CYOA)

    Quote Originally Posted by Planetbox View Post
    There appear to be numerous official documents on the desk, but upon closer examination it turns out that most of them are just pieces of sheet music. One corner of the desk has cleaning supplies and a rag on it. there doesn't appear to be much else of note.
    IS THAT A PUN I SEE??

    Do what Sock said, then ask about Magnifi and Antonio.
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    Re: Vesti and Lauren's Interdimensional Investigations (A CYOA)

    Yeah, do what Sock said.

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    Re: Vesti and Lauren's Interdimensional Investigations (A CYOA)

    Spoiler: The Land of the Quotes 


    Examine: The World

    You zoom into space and take a look at the world. It is mostly blue with a few multicolored landmasses scattered about. You immediately begin dying of outer space so you zoom back to Earth. You then examine the world up close, seeing many remarkable features and exciting scenes! You also see a bunch of annoying people. You also see a volcano, which you accidentally fly into. Since the CYOA can't really progress if the protagonist has been melted, that event is reset and the story continues as if it didn't happen.

    You ask Lauren if her alibi is really true. She agrees that she really didn't see Antonio in the office, which makes sense as seen due to information we already know.

    Talk: Office Room Visit

    You ask "Did you notice anything important when you visited Antonio Bridge's office last night." She thinks and replies "Hmm... Now that you mention it, I did notice something odd... When I arrived there I noticed that one of the violin's on the wall was lying on the floor, broken. I didn't really have time to examine it more closely though. I was going to tell Antonio about it today, but you can see how that turned out." {Lauren's Call updated in Evidence}

    Talk: Lauren's Wound

    "Do you actually have a wound on your arm?" Lauren sighs "So they mentioned that, did they? Well, I was cutting some meat at home yesterday, when I goofed up and sliced my wrist. Granted, I can't really confirm that statement." You ask "Can I see the wound?" She takes the white glove off of her right hand, and shows the wrist to you. Underneath it are two large bandages on the wrist and down the side. "I can't exactly show you the wound, because I'd bleed to death, which wouldn't really be efficient... but here's the bandage itself." {Visit Sheet Stain updated in Evidence}

    Present: Lauren Tehra: Evidence Room Thefts

    You try to shove the document regarding the thefts into Lauren's face, but fail. The paper simply slams into the window. Lauren looks at you past the sheet. "Is that the document on the thefts? I was told about that a lot when I was guarding the Evidence Room. I'm not sure why they bothered though. I doubt anyone would have tried to steal that evidence right in front a guard. They would surely steal the stuff when it's unguarded." "Do you have any information about these thefts?" "Not really." she replies "I certainly didn't see anything."

    Talk: Forensic Supplies

    "Can I borrow some of your forensic supplies for the investigation?" Lauren smiles "Sure!" She then reaches for her bag, but then remembers that he bag was confiscated. She sighs "Nevermind. They confiscated everything. Maybe you can get some at... Oh wait! I almost forgot!" She reaches into the pocket of her coat and pulls out a bottle of a blue liquid. She hands it to you. "The police didn't check this coat for some reason. To be honest I have no clue what they were doing. Anyway, all I have is that bottle of Luminol, but it should be enough for now." You take the bottle and reply "Thanks!" "Don't mention it! But do be careful with that stuff. It stains clothes." "...Does it really stain clothes?" "I've never tested that actually. But you clothes will be stained one way or another if I find out you've broken it." (I'm glad to have such nice friends.) {Luminol Testing Fluid added to Evidence} {{This bottle can be sprayed at anything (and anyone, of course) in a room at anytime. Simply specify what you are spraying with it to use it.}}

    Investigation: Detention Center
    Examine:
    This room is a barren as a deserted desert!
    Talk:
    Lauren Tehra
    Magnifi Glass
    The Wound
    Antonio Bridges
    Forensic Supplies
    Move:
    Chief's Office
    Medical Room
    Security Room
    Lobby
    Present:
    To Lauren Tehra
    Spray: Luminol
    What will you do?
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    Re: Vesti and Lauren's Interdimensional Investigations (A CYOA)

    Spray luminol at the bat.

    Ask Lauren about Antonio Bridges.
    Don't expect anything to make sense. That way you'll be pleasantly surprised if it does.


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    Re: Vesti and Lauren's Interdimensional Investigations (A CYOA)

    Ooooooooh, Luminol...
    go back to Magnifi and spray him with it.
    Then spray the book-weapon-doodily and the smeshed violin after you're done chatting with Lauren.
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    Re: Vesti and Lauren's Interdimensional Investigations (A CYOA)

    I think I speak for everyone here when I say to spray Lauren with the Luminol.

    And also present her your police badge...

    I GOT IT.

    FUSE YOUR POLICE BADGE WITH THE LUMINOL

    SPRAY EVERYONE WITH COPIES OF YOUR POLICE BADGE

    Or turn your Police Badge into Luminol, I guess

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    Re: Vesti and Lauren's Interdimensional Investigations (A CYOA)

    My AC Adapter is being stupid help.

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    You try to combine your Police Badge and Luminol together, but fail. After all, have YOU ever tried combining a liquid with a solid sturdy object? Vesti Gates isn't an alchemist, silly! I'd say we're off to a great start here!

    Present: Police Badge

    You reach for your police badge. "Stop it, please." Lauren says. You put your police badge away.

    Spray: Lauren: Luminol Testing Fluid

    You spray Lauren with the Luminol Testing Fluid. Sadly, this fails. After all, you and your friend are seperated by a wall of bulletproof glass. Don't ask me how Lauren got the Luminol to you in these circumstances, because I don't know. Maybe there's a hatch or something. Anyway, the Luminol just gets all over the glass. Lauren sighs "Vesti, could you please not waste my Luminol. That stuff is expensive, you know." You reply "This price tag says $9.99 on it." Lauren hesitates before responding. "Uh... that price tag was forged." (Does that mean this Luminol is an illegal good? Maybe Lauren is guilty after all...)

    Spray: Everything

    You try to spray everything you can reach. You spray the chair, then the wall, then the door, before Lauren says "Vesti, I don't need to get arrested for murder a second time. Please stop wasting my Luminol." You decide that it might be a good idea to stop.

    Present: Lauren Tehra: Visit Sheet Stain

    "Do you recall spilling your blood on that Visit Sheet in the Security Office?" Lauren replies "Of course not. The wound was pretty much fine by the time I got to the security room. Granted, it's not like it really matters, considering there's no real way to prove that. Not to mention we don't really know how my blood could have gotten on the visit sheet otherwise." (She's right... I'll have to look for something like that during my investigation...)

    Talk: Antonio Bridges

    "So what's your opinion on Chief Bridges?" Lauren replies "I don't know. He's ok, I guess. It would help if he would stop playing sad cello songs every time I reported a crime." "If you have problems with him, shouldn't you report them?" "Normally I'd do that, but every time I file a complaint he starts playing Vivaldi songs about four octaves too high." "That's weird. He hasn't been doing stuff like that to me." Lauren chuckles "Perhaps it was because I asked him if the guitar was a string instrument." "Yeah, that would probably do it."

    Talk: Magnifi Glass

    "What do you think of Magnifi Glass, the other detective." Lauren grumbles "He's kind of a jerk." You reply "I'd say that pretty much sums up his personality." She laughs, and continues "I suppose he is a fairly competent detective, for what it's worth. Granted, I suppose my opinion is somewhat affected by the fact that he arrested me a few hours ago." (I'd say her opinion is pretty accurate...)

    Spray: Luminol: Bloodstained Book

    You spray the Bloodstained Book with the Luminol. There is a reaction, of course. It reacts to the single large bloodstain, and a few small specks that were probably too faint to be registered. Either way, you don't see much of importance in these readings.

    Move: Manager's Office

    You decide that you should probably examine that violin now that you finally have the equipment you need. So you head back to Antonio's office. When you get there you discover that there's no one in the room at the moment, but the door is unlocked. You decide to just check the violin now instead of waiting for Antonio to get back.

    Spray: Luminol: Broken Violin

    You pick up the two pieces of the violin and put them on the desk. Taking out the Luminol, you spray it on both sides of the broken violin, wait a few seconds, and then shine the light thing on the violin. To your shock, the Luminol reacts to both sides of the violin, showing that there was a rather large bloodstain at the point where the violin broke. You let out a loud gasp for dramatic effect. However, you do not yet know whose blood is on the violin, and you don't currently have the means to test that. {Broken Violin updated in Evidence}

    Move: Medical Room

    You decide to head to the Medical Room. The victim's autopsy report has probably been completed by now, and so that could be helpful in your attempts to not fail. The room could also have some importance to the crime, so you leave the Chief's Office and head down the hall, and go right to the Medical Room.

    Date: Saturday, October 21st, 2015. Time: 10:40 AM Location: Police Department, Medical Room.

    You enter the Medical Room. As you would expect, the room is mostly white, with a tiled floor. There are three hospital beds on the room's right side, and a counter stretches across the other three walls. The counter contains many cupboards and is topped by several objects. There is some kind of cabinet on the far wall, with a bunch of drawers with staff member's names on them. You can see Officer Bajj's body on some kind of trolley thing. Examining it is a middle-aged woman in white clothes and with relatively short blond hair. She turns away from the corpse when you enter the room, and she glares at you. "So, I assume you're here for the Autopsy Report?" "Well... uh... yeah, I suppose so." "That figures. You're the fifth person who's asked for the autopsy report today. It's not like I do anything else. No, I'm the coroner, so I just pump out autopsy report's at the detective's leisure. I suppose if these officers get injured in a street fight, I'm supposed to make an autopsy report before I operate on them, right?" (Between her and Magnifi, this station sets the bar for company pride.) "Alright, Ann Istheesa, I've heard your sad life story plenty of times. Can we just move on with the investigation." She grumbles "Alright fine. The report is over on the counter. You can go check it out. I'm tired of performing surgery on this guy." {Ann Istheesa added to Profiles}

    Investigation: Medical Room
    Examine:
    Autopsy Report, Officer Bajj, Counter, Cabinet, Trolley Thing, Door.
    Talk:
    Ann Istheesa
    Coroner
    Officer Bajj
    Autopsy Report
    Medical Room
    Move:
    Chief's Office
    Detention Center
    Security Room
    Lobby
    Present:
    To Ann Istheesa
    Spray: Luminol
    What will you do?

    {{Gosh guys why'd you make me write such a long update.}}
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    Re: Vesti and Lauren's Interdimensional Investigations (A CYOA)

    Examine the Autopsy Report and that Trolley Thing, then talk to Ann about being a Coroner and Officer Bajj.
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    Re: Vesti and Lauren's Interdimensional Investigations (A CYOA)

    Spray Luminol on the next update.
    Autopsy report and trolley like Sock said, then talk about being a coroner.
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    Re: Vesti and Lauren's Interdimensional Investigations (A CYOA)

    Spoiler: IT'S TIME! 


    Present: Police Badge

    You decide to do what you always must do, and show poor Ann your marvelous police badge. She glares at it."Why are you showing me this?" You hapilly reply "Because I want to know what you think of it!" "Alright fine. If you really must know, I think it is a useless piece of metal trash that's just an excuse for detectives to act superior to everyone else. Now are you happy?" (That's not the kind of opinion I wanted to hear...

    You consider spraying Ann with Luminol, but ultimately decide that that would be a terrible idea. You also consider spraying the next update, but Vesti isn't capable of breaking the fourth wall like that.

    Examine: Autopsy Report

    You walk over to the counter and take a look at the autopsy report. You scan through it. Plenty of the information about Officer Bajj is stuff you already knew, however the report states that a small fragment of wood was found in the victim's forehead. The neck wound was also dealt postmortem. You show the report to Ann Istheesa and ask "Is this all the information you could find from the body?" She replies "Pretty much. The observations made an the crime scene were about the only things the body could tell us. Is that a problem?" "Of course not! I was just asking!" {Crime Scene Notes changed to Bajj's Autopsy Report and updated in Evidence}

    Examine: Trolley Thing

    You take a look at the aptly-titles trolley thing. It is a raised platform on wheels. The platform itself appears to be cushioned, which is pretty helpful considering it's meant to hold the injured. Ann explains "We use the trolley to transport injured officers and civilians to this medical room. It's also used to transport corpses during murder investigations." You ask "Where was this trolley on the night of the murder." Ann replies "As far as I know, it was in this room. I had things to do all over this building, so I can't say for certain if it went anywhere. Granted, the same goes for most of the objects in this room..." Once she's stopped talking, you look at the bottom of the cart. You don't notice any obvious paint stains on the wheels. The cart seems pretty clean, in fact. {Trolley Thing added to Evidence}

    Examine: Officer Bajj

    You ask "Did you know the victim personally?" Ann sighs "Not really. To be honest, I don't really know many of the police officers on this force. Being the coroner, I don't really see them much." You try to say something, but she interrupts "And before you ask, I don't know anyone who would have wanted him dead. I've gone through this conversation at least three times today, and to be honest it's getting pretty old!" (Your bad attitude is getting pretty old.)

    Examine: Cabinet

    "Can I take a look at that cabinet over there?" Ann mutters "Sure you can, if genetic records really interest you so much." You ignore her last comment, and walk to the cabinet. You open the drawer with your name on it. Inside are various containers holding various objects. You see a bottle of a red liquid, a case containing a lock of hair, what appears to be sweat, among other things. "What is all this stuff?" "Objects containing the genes of the people working here. You know, hair, sweat, blood, and all that. There's also fingerprint records in there. There's a more extensive collection of genetic records in another room." "How did you obtain all this stuff?" "I don't think you need to know." You continue looking through the drawers until you reach Lauren Tehra's drawer, where you notice something odd. "Are all of these glass containers supposed to have the same amount of blood in them?" "Of course." Ann replies "Why do you ask?" You continue "Well, the bottle of Lauren's blood appears to have less in it than the others." Ann sighs "Well, that's not supposed to happen. You didn't spill it, did you?" "I think you'd already know if I had spilled blood all over the room." {Genetic Records added to Evidence}

    Present: Broken Violin

    You show Ann Istheesa the violin messing up her name as well and then say "Could you test the blood on this violin? I think it could help us STRING this case together!" Ann shakes her head and says "Never do that in my prescense again. Anyway, I have the genetic records, so I can test it. Just hand it over." You give her the violin, and she walks to the counter with it. "I should be finished with this in a few minutes. Don't break anything while I'm working." You resist the urge to spill all the liquid containers onto the floor.

    Investigation: Medical Room
    Examine:
    Officer Bajj, Counter, Door.
    Talk:
    Ann Istheesa
    Coroner
    Officer Bajj
    Autopsy Report
    Medical Room
    Move:
    Chief's Office
    Detention Center
    Security Room
    Lobby
    Present:
    To Ann Istheesa
    Spray: Luminol
    What will you do?
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    Missing blood, huh? Wait for Ann to return, then ask her about the Medical Room. Who else has access?
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