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    Aeriopolis

    First off, I'll just say that this will PROBABLY not be 50,000 words. I am in the Young Writer's Program, so for now, I'm just going for 10,000. It will go over that though. With each update, I'll just put in the number of words acheived instead of editing a post.
    Basically, this is an amateur work. Well, duh.

    But without further ado... here is Aeriopolis.

    Spoiler: Chapter 1, part 1 


    Spoiler: Chapter 1, part 2 


    I divided the text so that I won't hurt your eyes or something.

    Number of words: 1,600
    It's kinda sad how the world can be a boring place.

    May I present... my art thread! Stop by for a visit!

    Check out my CYOA here!

    "YOUR RESISTANCE IS USELESS!"
    -Palkia, Pokemon Mystery Dungeon

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    Re: Aeriopolis

    Aaand chapter two.

    Spoiler: Chapter 2, part 1 


    Spoiler: Chapter 2, part 2 


    Again, the parts is just for the sake of people's precious eyes. The real text is not divided, nor does it have anything to do with the story.
    Also, I've just discovered that I describe too much. But heck, it's NaNoWriMo.

    Word Count: 3,008
    Last edited by TwilitKirby; November 6th, 2012 at 02:23 PM.
    It's kinda sad how the world can be a boring place.

    May I present... my art thread! Stop by for a visit!

    Check out my CYOA here!

    "YOUR RESISTANCE IS USELESS!"
    -Palkia, Pokemon Mystery Dungeon

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    Re: Aeriopolis

    This looks really cool! I'll definitely be following this.

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    Re: Aeriopolis

    AUGH WHY DID I PROCRASTINATE FOR A WEEK ARGH
    But yeah, here's chapter three.

    Spoiler: Chapter 3, part 1 


    Spoiler: Chapter 3, part 2 


    if anyone thinks theres going to be a romantic scene in this novel, then lets just say theres a 10% chance of that happening

    Word count: 5,093
    Last edited by TwilitKirby; November 20th, 2012 at 02:21 PM.
    It's kinda sad how the world can be a boring place.

    May I present... my art thread! Stop by for a visit!

    Check out my CYOA here!

    "YOUR RESISTANCE IS USELESS!"
    -Palkia, Pokemon Mystery Dungeon

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    Re: Aeriopolis

    Woo, I'm on a roll here!

    Spoiler: Chapter 4, part 1 


    Spoiler: Chapter 4, part 2 


    Word count: 6,901
    It's kinda sad how the world can be a boring place.

    May I present... my art thread! Stop by for a visit!

    Check out my CYOA here!

    "YOUR RESISTANCE IS USELESS!"
    -Palkia, Pokemon Mystery Dungeon

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    Re: Aeriopolis

    X3 Combo!

    Spoiler: Chapter 5, part 1 


    Spoiler: Chapter 5, part 2 


    [inserts Skyward Sword reference]

    Word count: 9,781
    It's kinda sad how the world can be a boring place.

    May I present... my art thread! Stop by for a visit!

    Check out my CYOA here!

    "YOUR RESISTANCE IS USELESS!"
    -Palkia, Pokemon Mystery Dungeon

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