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    Danny Coast and the First Labor

    Sorta tryin' to do somethin' like an Indiana Jones/Uncharted sorta thing, but without the luxury of getting to do research/fact checking on locales and ancient cultures, due to time constraints and budget. But, hey, maybe it'll still end up a fun read.

    Spoiler: Part One 


    Only 1,439 words so far. Gotta step it up, but I need a break.
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    Re: Danny Coast and the First Labor

    Overall a pretty fun read thus far, and seems like it has the potential to be a fun story. It's absolutely reminiscent of Indiana Jones so it'll be a lot of fun to see how it progresses, and Danny and Junk seem like they'll play off of each other really nicely. I'm interested to see where the story goes, I've always loved this kind of story and this is an interesting variation on it (of all the mythical objects people have gone on treasure hunts for, I've never heard of the Nemean Lion's pelt as the target, pretty original idea in that regard).
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    Re: Danny Coast and the First Labor

    Alright, I had a bit of a second wind, so here's the second bit of my writing for the day, bringing me up to 2,598 words.

    Spoiler: Part Two 

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