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    Re: Vesti and Lauren's Interdimensional Investigations (A CYOA)

    Talk to yourself in a strange accent about what you ate for breakfast while you wait for Ann to finish. Spray Luminol on the genetic records if you can, specifically on Lauren's blood jar.
    Oh yeah also ask Ann about her favorite color.
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    Re: Vesti and Lauren's Interdimensional Investigations (A CYOA)

    {{Sorry, but this one's gonna have to be pretty short. My update schedule got mangled beyond comprehension and turned into a bowl of frosted flakes, so I have pretty much an hour left to write this entire update. Also of note, the next update will come on Thursday because I won't be able to update on Friday. So that's kind of important.}}

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    {{Also I think 2/3 of the forums were under the impression that Ann actually left the room, but she's just at the counter in here. Sorry for not making that clear.}}

    You tell Ann Istheesa "Sorry for my attitude earlier. I was hoping we could make this investigation as PAINLESS as possible!" Ann monotonously says "Looks like I got some of my tears in this blood. This test will probably take me about a minute longer now." Then she gets back to work, muttering rather rude things about her parents under her breath.

    Ask: Ann: Favorite Color

    "What's your favorite color?" you ask. She replies "White. Stop."

    You ask "Can anyone access these records?" She replies "Sure if they can get in the door. The door isn't even locked in the first place." "Is it possible that-" She interjects "I don't need your theories right now. I'm kind of busy if you don't mind."

    You continue "Hey Ann! Do you know what time the victim died?" She sighs "Yeah I do. Officer Bajj died at about 10:22. Something like that. Seriously though, I need to test this blood." Ann Istheesa accidentally puts on headphones and then accidentally plugs them into an iPod. She proceeds to accidentally set the volume really high. {{Bajj's Autopsy Report updated in Evidence}}

    Spray: Luminol: Trolley Thing

    You decide to leave Ann alone for a bit. You spray Luminol on the Trolley Thing. You shine the light across it. There are large bloodstains on the far end, and pretty much everywhere else. This doesn't really surprise you that much, considering the trolley's purpose, and the fact that it was just used to move Bajj, like, ten minutes ago.

    Spray: Luminol: Lauren's Blood

    Take a guess regarding what happens here. To point you in the right direction, I can tell you one thing. The entire police station didn't explode in a shower of banana peels.

    Examine: Door

    You take a look at the door on the opposite side of the room. The door is labelled "Advanced Genetic Records". You attempt to open it, but it's locked. You look inside and see many more drawers with the names of various people in town. One of the closest drawers is slightly ajar. You notice blood, hair, and some of the stuff that was in the drawers outside.

    You try to move to Antonio's office, but I don't really have time for that. Or anything else, for that matter. Whoops! Also, Ann will finish with the blood test next update.

    Investigation: Medical Room
    Examine:
    Officer Bajj, Counter.
    Talk:
    Ann Istheesa
    Coroner
    Officer Bajj
    Autopsy Report
    Medical Room
    Move:
    Chief's Office
    Detention Center
    Security Room
    Lobby
    Present:
    To Ann Istheesa
    Spray: Luminol
    What will you do?
    OH MY GOODNESS!

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    Nonobnoxiously ask about the jar open drawer.
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    Re: Vesti and Lauren's Interdimensional Investigations (A CYOA)

    Quote Originally Posted by SockOutTheWindow View Post
    Nonobnoxiously ask about the jar open drawer.
    Yesh.
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    Re: Vesti and Lauren's Interdimensional Investigations (A CYOA)

    I'm updating early today, as I won't have time to update tomorrow.

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    I'd say Pierre's action speaks for itself. There's honestly not much I can add because the original is already amazing.

    You consider examining the cart to see if the trail came from the cart, but you don't really know how to do that. After all, you're not a forensic detective. It would probably be a better idea to ask one of the forensic investigators to perform that kind of test.

    Examine: Counter

    You examine the counter. The counter takes up almost two sides of the room, and several objects are scattered across it. These include various chemicals and tools likely used to perform medical stuff. However, you don't really recognize any of the objects. Not to mention several of the objects have rather large blades, and you have a tendency to cause yourself great injury with those.

    Examine: Officer Bajj

    You examine the body of the late Officer Bajj. The body is lying on one of the hospital beds. There's not much else of note on the body, especially considering it's already recieved an autopsy. Thinking back on it, you realize that you never found out what Bajj's first name was, though it was probably something just as punny as everyone else's names seem to be.

    Suddenly, Ann takes off her headphones and brings the violin back to you. She says "I have indentified the blood." You ask "Was it Bajj's?" She sighs "Don't be ridiculous. It was Abraham Lincoln's." "Was it Bajj's or was it not!" "Of course it was. But that's not all. I found a clear piece of rubber caught underneath one of the strings on the fingerboard. I'm not sure whether that's important, but it could be." You take the violin back "Thanks for actually giving me a straight answer." {Broken Violin added to Evidence}

    Talk: Open Drawer

    You ask Ann what all those drawers behind the door in the back are for. She explains "Those are the advanced genetic records. It's where the records for people in this town are stored, other than the people working here. However, the door is locked so no one can steal someone's hair and clone them, or something." You ask "Why do you keep the records for people working here outside of the locked room, where people can get them?" She grumbles "I don't know. It just makes things easier. Don't question my methods." "Why is one of the drawers open?" "Because I forgot to close it all the way. Is that a crime?" "We're in a police station. We could ask the chief!" "Alright, this conversation is over now."

    Investigation: Medical Room
    Examine:
    Talk:
    Ann Istheesa
    Coroner
    Officer Bajj
    Autopsy Report
    Medical Room
    Move:
    Chief's Office
    Detention Center
    Security Room
    Lobby
    Present:
    To Ann Istheesa
    Spray: Luminol
    What will you do?
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    Re: Vesti and Lauren's Interdimensional Investigations (A CYOA)

    Well I guess we could talk about being a Coroner to Ann. Then maybe go ask Lauren... something... I'm drawing a blank.
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    Re: Vesti and Lauren's Interdimensional Investigations (A CYOA)

    Quote Originally Posted by OshaliteX2 View Post
    Well I guess we could talk about being a Coroner to Ann. Then maybe go ask Lauren... something... I'm drawing a blank.
    Seconded, but head to the Chief's Office instead. Ask him about those Advanced Genetic Records the station is keeping.
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    I wrote something here but then I deleted it.

    You consider than Ann might be a suspect for framing Lauren due to her having easy access to the records and stuff like that. You decide to get some more information out of her.

    Present: Broken Violin

    You show Ann the violin that she just saw five seconds ago. You ask "Do you think this violin is the murder weapon?" She replies "Yeah. It probably is. I can't think of any other reason why it would be covered in the victim's blood." "If that's the case, don't you think it would be a good idea to perform a fingerprint test?" "Yeah, that would be a great idea. It would help if I was a forensic investigator. Sadly, I'm not, so maybe you should bug something else about it." You decide to bug someone else about it later.

    Present: White Gloves

    You show the gloves to Ann. "Do the gloves have a tear in them?" She looks at it closely and replies "Yeah. There is a tear on the right thumb of the right glove. However, I would like to know exactly why you have one of my pairs of medical gloves on you." "These are yours?" you ask. She replies "Of course they are. Do you know of any other profession where clear rubber gloves are used?" "Uh... Maybe..." "Either way, these gloves are disposable, so an individual glove isn't that important to me. You can keep it if it has sme relevance to the case." {White Gloves updated in Evidence}

    Talk: Coroner

    In an attempt to stop Ann Istheesa from glaring at you in annoyance, you ask "What is it like being a coroner?" She mutters "It's really fun. I get to enjoy examing bodies and writing up needlessly specific reports any time someone kicks the bucket. Then a bunch of detectives and lawyers pester me until I finish typing it up. It's a good thing I actually enjoy the doctor part of being a doctor, or I would have quit this job a while ago. But for some reason the chief though it would be a good idea to put my office all the way over..." Ann Istheesa goes on and on about how terrble her job is. You decide that you should probably get out of here before she takes her disgruntlement out on you.

    Move: Lobby

    You begin choosing where to go next. You consider talking to Lauren, but you doubt she has much to say. You also consider going to the Chief's Office, but doubt that he has much information either. Not to mention you don't really want to deal with him right now. Instead you leave the Medical Room without Ann noticing and wander off to the Lobby.

    Date: Saturday, October 21st, 2015. Time: 11:30 AM Location: Police Department, Lobby.

    At the lobby you find a few policemen walking around aimlessly. A few of them seem to be working, but several seem to be using their phones. You consider telling them off, but then realize you were doing the same thing a day ago. Before you can figure out this difficult moral dilemma one of the you are interrupted "HI! You're Vesti Gates, aren't you?" Once your eardrums have partially recovered, you turn to see who is behind you. You see a man in a wearing a police uniform and a lab coat at the same time... somehow. You say "Um... forgive me for asking... but who exactly are you?" The man smiles and replies "I'm Lucas Hall, police officer and forensic investigator! I just joined the force!" "Wait-" "You are Vesti Gates!" he interrupts "I'd recognize that hairstyle anywhere! I've heard a lot about you! You were the one who solved that case in only two hours!" You indignanatly reply "That is a HUGE exageration! I took me two hours and ten minutes!" Lucas ignores you "Even if I'm merely a rookie, I still know a lot about this place! Not to mention I'm already a fairly skilled forensic investigator! If you need my help, just ask away!" You sigh. {Lucas Hall added to Profiles}

    Investigation: Medical Room
    Examine:
    Pointless Chairs, Red Carts, Main Desk, Picture, Officers.
    Talk:
    Lucas Hall
    Forensic Investigator
    Police Station
    Chief Strings
    Move:
    Chief's Office
    Detention Center
    Security Room
    Medical Room
    Present:
    To Lucas Hall
    Spray: Luminol
    What will you do?
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    Re: Vesti and Lauren's Interdimensional Investigations (A CYOA)

    Unsigh because you were looking for a forensic investigator just a moment ago. Talk to him about being a Forensic Investigator and present the Broken Violin.
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    Ask favorite color and... maybe NOT police badge. I think this guy might explode with excitement if we do that.
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    Re: Vesti and Lauren's Interdimensional Investigations (A CYOA)

    Spoiler: Here we go again! 


    Examine: Pointless Chairs

    You take a look around the room. There are about 16 chairs in the middle of the room. They are arranged outward in a square shape, with four on each side. You ask, "What are all these chairs for?" Lucas replies "What do you mean?" "Well, this isn't some kind of waiting room. This is the lobby of the police department. There's no reason to have sixteen chairs!" "Maybe they're here for police officers to sit on if they're tired!" "I'm not sure I understand why a police officer would specifically be tired here. Aren't they supposed to be patrolling the area?" "Well then what are all these police officers doing in this lobby." You stare at the rest of the room for a second, then respond, "I don't know anymore."

    Present: Police Badge: Lucas Hall

    You show your Police Badge to Lucas Hall. "This is my police badge!" you proudly declare. Lucas Hall starts freaking out. "Wow that's amazing! But look at this!" He reaches into his pocket and pulls out his own police badge. He proceeds to shove the object into your face. "This is MY police badge" he shouts rather loudly. The force of his words pushes you backwards a little. You realize how everybody else usually feels when you do that.

    You try to spray Lucasin the face. He starts to glow a bright blue. He shouts "Wow! I got sprayed with Luminol by Vesti Gates! This is awesome!" He then tries to steak the Luminol, but you manage to stop him.

    Talk: Favorite Color

    You ask Lucas Hall about his favorite color. He answers extremely quickly, "Orange! No, blue! Er... Maybe red? Or green! AUGH I can't decide! Wait, I like them all! Tye-dye all the way!" Unfortunately, you sort of lost track of what he was saying, so you don't notice his final answer.

    Spray: Luminol: Glove

    You spray some Luminol on the white gloves. Both of them, to be specific. You shine the light on both of them, but nothing happens. It doesn't appear that there's any blood on the gloves.

    Examine: Red Carts

    You take a look at the red carts. They roughly resemble a shopping cart; however, the cart has no openings in it. Instead, it is completely uniform in surface, like a wheelbarrow. You already recognize the carts. They are the carts detectives use to transport evidence in and out of the evidence room. In fact, you used one of these carts just last night, when you discovered the body. Lucas Hall notices you examining the carts and chimes in, "Those carts were actually painted by me! It was my first job!" "Really?" you ask, "When was this?" "Just yesterday afternoon." he replies, "I repainted all of the carts, and finished at around 9:40!" "Hmm... That information could be useful..." you mutter. {Evidence Carts added to Evidence}

    Present: Broken Violin & Trolley Thing

    You shove information on the two items into Lucas Hall's hands. "Do you think you could check this violin for fingerprints, and then see if there are any traces of the paint from the hallway on this trolley?" Lucas salutes proudly, and replies, "Of course I can! I'll be right back with that information!" Lucas runs down the nearby hallway. After about ten minutes he returns.

    "Alright! First, the violin. I checked it for fingerprints, and found several sets on it... well... pretty much everywhere! All of these prints belonged to Antonio Bridges! As for the trolley, I didn't find any traces of the paint on it. Not even on the wheels! Sorry about that..." You take the information back from Lucas, and think about how this information fits in with everything. {Broken Violin and Trolley Thing updated in Evidence}

    Investigation: Police Station Lobby
    Examine:
    Main Desk, Picture, Officers.
    Talk:
    Lucas Hall
    Forensic Investigator
    Police Station
    Chief Strings
    Move:
    Chief's Office
    Detention Center
    Security Room
    Medical Room
    Present:
    To Lucas Hall
    Spray: Luminol
    What will you do?
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    Talk to Lucas about the Police station and being a Forensic Investigator.
    Did I miss something about chief strings?
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    Quote Originally Posted by Planetbox View Post
    steak the Luminol
    Contemplate using Luminol to check doneness of steaks.

    Compare the piece of rubber from the broken violin with the rubber gloves. Then head to the Chief's office and ask him about why the glove was in his trash, and why a piece was in his violin.
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    Quote Originally Posted by OshaliteX2
    Did I miss something about chief strings?
    Sometimes I'm too lazy to put every single action into the update. That was a case of that happening.

    Spoiler: The update when I learn how to mix punctuation with quotation marks. 


    You consider hitting on Lucas, but then realize that such an act would be counterproductinve and out-of-character. However, poor Vesti is not aware that he is a character, so instead he simply becomes extremely confused.

    Present: White Gloves

    You present the gloves for Lucas for investigation. "Could you forensically investigate these gloves?" "Sure!" he exclaims, "What do you want me to do with them?" "Investigate them, of course!" Lucas looks puzzled. "Um... Could you be more specific?" You sigh, "Right. That could be important." You bring out the broken violin. "Could you check to see if the material in the glove matches with the piece found in this violin?" He salutes, "Sure! I'll have that finished in no time!" He proceeds to take the two objects and begins using supplies from his bag on them.

    Talk: Forensic Investigator

    You ask, "When did you become a forensic investigator?" "Probably a month ago!" he explains, "I've been enjoying my job ever since!" "Have you wanted to be an investigator for a while?" Lucas replies, "Of course I have! It's been my dream job since my youth! Well, not really. Maybe since I was 10. After all, every kid wanted to be a firefighter before then, so..." You angrily reply, "Don't be ridiculous! Everyone in my preschool wanted to be a doctor!" "I wasn't being serious! It was only a hyperbole! Not to mention, I knew several kids who wanted to be a teacher!" You respond, "When I was a kid, I wanted to be an accountant!" "Well, I wanted to be a superhero! I even had one of those cheesy superhero training kits! Did YOU have a superhero training kit!" (I'm not exactly sure how this conversation got de-railed so quickly... I should probably stop it now.)

    Talk: Chief Bridges {{How about we pretend that I didn't butcher Antonio's name in the Talk list, ok?}}

    You ask, "So what do you think of Antonio Bridges?" Lucas hall starts talking excitedly, "He's awesome! When I joined this force he gave me a this cool uniform! And even better, he's paying me money to work here." (Wait, is that considered abnormal behavior?) You continue, "How do you feel about his... interest in strings instruments?" Lucas explains, "I think it's awesome! He's so good at his job that he can do it while teaching himself an instrument! I've even seen him playing an instrument when he's supposed to be working! That proves that he must be good at his job. (This man is really good at seeing negative qualities in a positive light...)

    Talk: Repainting

    You inquire, "Were you specifically asked to repaint the evidence carts by anyone?" He answers, "Not really. According to the Chief, those carts are repainted twice a year. One of those days is October 20th, and the chief assigned me to do that this time. Apparently, the new recruits are usually told to do that." "I see. That's doesn't surprise me." {Evidence Carts updated in Evidence}

    Lucas suddenly tells you, "The gloves and the fragment indeed match! They fragment also appears to fit perfectly in the hole left in the glove." "Alright. That doesn't surprise me either." {White Gloves updated in Evidence}

    Examine: Evidence Carts Again

    You walk over to the corner containing the evidence carts. There are exactly three carts in the corner. That number is probably too many. The station supposedly only had one before then, but then Chief Bridges accidentally ordered two more. No one is certain exactly how that happened. You take a look at the base of the carts. Lucas Hall is apparently not that skilled at painting, because a large quantity of the red paint dripped onto the carts legs. Some of this paint ended up on the wheels, and it has since dried. The same thing has occured on every cart. You decide to spray some Luminol inside of each of the carts and see what happens. Upon completing this task, the bottom of one of the carts begins to glow bright blue. You are beginning to understand how this crime was performed. {Evidence Carts updated in Evidence again}

    Investigation: Police Station Lobby
    Examine:
    Main Desk, Picture, Officers.
    Talk:
    Lucas Hall
    Forensic Investigator
    Police Station
    Chief Bridges
    Move:
    Chief's Office
    Detention Center
    Security Room
    Medical Room
    Present:
    To Lucas Hall
    Spray: Luminol
    What will you do?


    At this point you have pretty much found all the evidence in the case (hopefully. If you couldn't tell, I'm bad at planning these things.) So, you have a choice. Do you still investigate to take care of a few last minute things, or move on to the Argument section?
    OH MY GOODNESS!

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    Argumentation time, I suppose.
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    When it's time to argumentify, enter with a smokescreen of Luminol to look cool and edgy. How much Luminol do we even have, anyway?
    And talk about the Police Station too, why not?
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    Re: Vesti and Lauren's Interdimensional Investigations (A CYOA)

    This update was originally longer but then the entire thing got deleted, so I'm just skipping ahead to the confrontation instead of re-writing some of the examining stuff. Sorry, but I don't have time to redo the whole thing.

    Spoiler: NOT FEELING UP TO IT RIGHT NOW. SORRY. 


    Before you can do any of the stuff you would have done in an alternate timeline, you phone rings. You answer it. "Hello. This is Vesti Gates speaking." A voice on the other line says, "Er... Hello... This is Officer George. Detective Glass told me to call you. He wants to meet in the Detention Center. He says you've had enough time, and it's time to put the case to rest." "Alright. I'll be right there." You hang up and try to leave, but Lucas interrupts, "Where are you going?" You answer, "Detective Glass told me to meet him at the Detention Center so we can solve this case." Lucas shouts excitadly, "Awesome! I can't miss this! See you there!" Before you can react, Lucas dashes down the hall and out the door. You follow.

    Date: Saturday, October 21st, 2015. Time: 12:30 AM Location: Police Department, Detention Center.

    When you make it to the detention center, Lucas is already there. You also see Antonio Bridges, who is playing a tune on his viola. Ann Istheesa is standing nearby, looking like she wants to strangle the chief. Lauren Tehra stands behind the glass, with Magnifi Glass standing in front. A few policemen are scattered about as well. Magnifi glares at you, and says, "Ah, there you are. It sure took you quite a while." You reply, "Sorry that I'm not as much of the picture of youth as you are. However, a detective is meant to train their mind, not their legs." Magnifi grumbles, "Well said. For that is the reason I called you here. It is time for us to pass down judgement on this woman." Lauren Tehra glares angrily in his direction. You respond, "You're forgetting that I've investigated myself, and I still firmly believe that Lauren is innocent." Magnifi smiles "Do you? Well, my belief remains unchanged. I hope you've investigated well, or this will have been a waste of time.

    Testimony: Lauren's Guilt Continues
    Magnifi: My earlier point remains the same.
    Magnifi: Officer Bajj was killed in the Security Room.
    Magnifi: Lauren was in charge of the station at the time.
    Magnifi: She met the victim and hit her once with the book.
    Magnifi: He was still alive, so she slammed his head against the ground.
    Magnifi: His head hit the spot where he lies now.
    Magnifi: Those are the facts of this case!
    PRESS a statement or PRESENT evidence.
    Evidence is on page 1.
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    Re: Vesti and Lauren's Interdimensional Investigations (A CYOA)

    WAIT A SECOND.
    HOLD IT!!
    >Bajj's autopsy report, statement 5. The head blow was dealt first! Either way if Magnifi was referring to his neck as his head, how could Lauren have slammed his NECK against the ground?
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    Re: Vesti and Lauren's Interdimensional Investigations (A CYOA)

    I accidentally put two contradictions in this testimony because I'm smart. I'm just going to go with the second one since more people picked it and leave the other one for later.

    Also, I apparently forgot to make this clear in the first post. Vesti Gares is male, and about 30 years old. Lauren Tehra is female and about 29 years old. I said all that in the "prototype case" but apparently forgot to say it again so there you go.

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    You consider pressing Glass's face into the Glass, but then remember that you don't like getting sued.

    Present: Bajj's Autopsy Report: Statement 5



    Magnifi groans, "What is it now?" You smile proudly, "I'm just going to point out the silliness of your previous statement!" Magnifi sighs, "Please never say that again." You pull out the Autopsy Report and say, "But I'm honestly kind of dissapointed in you, Magnifi. Didn't you even read the Autopsy Report?" "Of course I did," Magnifi explains, "I don't see what that has to do with anything!" "Oh really! Take a look here, it clearly says that the neck wound was dealt postmortem." Magnifi head twitches, which to him is probably akin to a cry of shock. He glares at the Autopsy Report. He shouts,"This is ridiculous!" You laugh, "Of course it is! After all, why would Lauren deal a second blow to a man who was already dead!" Magnifi looks mildly annoyed. He shouts, "Ann Istheesa! What is this about?" Ann glares at the detective, "What is it?!" Magnifi pulls out a report, similar to yours. "This report says absolutely nothing about the neck wound being post-mortem! What do you think you're doing!" Ann retorts, "What do you think you're doing? You're always barging into my office, demanding your precious autopsy reports! So I gave you one! Rather I was finished with it or not! Since Vesti was polite enough to wait until ten minutes after I took the body, I gave him the updated autopsy report! Is that really a problem? I did what you asked!" Magnifi looks shocked at the length of her response. Eventually, he continues, "Well, alright then... Continuing on, this doesn't change anything." You respond, "Really? Why not! There was no reason for Lauren to strike a dead body?" "Really?" Magnifi explains, "I can think of a simple explanation. After Lauren hit Bajj with the book, he would have fallen over. So, after dying to the first blow, he fell and hit his neck on the floor! It's a simple explanation!" You shout, "That's just ridiculous! You have no proof of that!" Magnifi smiles, "You may be right, but it's the best solution we have. Unless you can provide another one?" You reply, "Of course I can!" [i](Alright, in order for this theory to work, I'll need to present a murder weapon and then point out the real crime scene. I know both of those, don't I?)

    What is the real murder weapon and crime scene?
    PRESENT evidence.
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    Murder weapon is the broken violin, crime scene would be the Chief's office.
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    You consider beating Magnifi up. Unfortunately, you realize that, in contrast, Magnifi would probably end up beating you up.



    You smile, "Magnifi, I'm sure you would have discovered this too, if only you had bothered to investigate." Magnifi glares at you, "What are you saying? I did plenty of investigating! Certainly more than you." You reply, "Of course you did! However, you remained too ingrained in trying to prove your original arrest, that you turned away from the truth." Magnifi looks extremely irritated with your philosophy. "What are you talking about!" You smile, and show him the violin. "THIS is the true murder weapon." Magnifi says, "What! That destroyed violin! You can't be serious!" "No, this is indeed the murder weapon. The violin was still whole before the murder, so it stands to reason that it was broken sometime then. Not only that, but this violin has Officer Bajj's blood on both sides! That's concrete proof that it is the murder weapon!" Magnifi looks like he's about to say something, but you interrupt him. "Is that not enough for you? Well here's something else! A fragment of wood was found in Officer Bajj's forehead, which likely came from this violin. The Autopsy Report proves this. Any objections, Detective Glass?" Magnifi looks somewhat stunned. "Good. I didn't think so. Now, as for the crime scene, there's really only one other place that it could conceivably be. If this violin was always in the Chief's Office, then I'm certain that the crime took place there! And need I remind you, that Lauren Tehra was scheduled to be in the Security Room, so how could she have committed a murder in the Chief's Office?" Silence fills the room as everyone present takes in everything you've said. Magnifi looks deep in thought. Soon, the silence is broken by Antonio, who starts clapping extremely loudly. He says, "Good job, Detective Gates! Why we may not know the real killer yet, I think we can safely say the Lauren is innocent! I'll get her out of the Detention Center now!" The chief pulls out a ring of keys and walks towards the door. Lauren smiles at you from behind the glass, and then walks to the exit.



    All eyes in the room turn to Magnifi Glass. He points directly at Antonio, and says, "I wouldn't be so hasty, Chief. The suspect isn't cleared of all charges just yet!" You sigh, "What is it now, Magnifi." The detective glares at you, "Did you really think I'd give up that easy, Vesti?" You mutter, "Well, I was kind of hoping you would..." Magnifi sighs, "Don't think you've won just yet, Detective Gates. I won't let a possible criminal go free!"

    Testimony: I'm Bad at Testomony Names.
    Magnifi: I will accept that the crime took place in the Chief's Office...
    Magnifi: ...and that Lauren spent most of her time in the Security Room.
    Magnifi: But that doesn't mean it isn't possible for her to have committed the crime.
    Magnifi: Perhaps Lauren was trying to take documents from the Chief's room...
    Magnifi: ...and the victim discovered her!
    Magnifi: So Lauren, in a panic, took the violin from the wall...
    Magnifi: ...and broke it over the victim's head!
    PRESS a statement or PRESENT evidence.
    Evidence is on page 1.
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    Re: Vesti and Lauren's Interdimensional Investigations (A CYOA)

    Press statement 3
    HOLD IT!!
    Statement 6! Broken violin (rest in pieces you wonderful instrument)! It only has Antonio's fingerprints... er, make that not Lauren's. Why in Jalapeno Creek would it not have the suspect's fingerprints?
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    Re: Vesti and Lauren's Interdimensional Investigations (A CYOA)

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    Press statement 3
    HOLD IT!!
    Statement 6! Broken violin (rest in pieces you wonderful instrument)! It only has Antonio's fingerprints... er, make that not Lauren's. Why in Jalapeno Creek would it not have the suspect's fingerprints?
    Because the killer was wearing rubber gloves. Press Statement 4 instead. What would Lauren have been looking for?

    Lauren: Death glare at Magnifi.
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    Spoiler: Oh no it's me again... 


    Since I'm kind of low on time I don't think I have time to press Statement Four like one person requested. Whoops sorry maybe I should try harder next time!
    On second thought, me and "try hard" don't really go together...

    Present: Broken Violin: Statement 6



    You show the Broken Violin... again. Magnifi replies, "Really, Vesti? Presenting the same piece of evidence twice in a row! How tacky!" You retort, "You're the one who ignored this piece of evidence! Twice! THAT is just dissapointing!" "Alright," Magnifi sighs, "What about that violin is so important?" "The violin only had one set of fingerprints on it! Those were Antonio's which is logical, as he would have used the instrument often! Which means that Lauren must have been wearing gloves of some kind, which wouldn't make sense if her fingerprints were on the book! {{Author's Note: I can't remember if I ever said her fingerprints were on the book. Either way, they are now, whether you like it or not.}} Thus, Lauren can't have committed the crime! Lauren must be innocent!"



    Magnifi shouts, "Really? I don't know about that... There is one way Lauren could still have murdered Officer Bajj." "And what would that be?" you ask. "Simple," Magnifi explains, "...The murder was premeditiated." You raise your hand, about to object, when his point suddenly registers in your head, and you instead respond by slapping yourself on the forehead. "Oh... Right..." Detective Glass continues, "This is what I think happened on the night of the crime. Lauren left, claiming she had a call from the Chief, for his office. She either brought a pair of gloves with her, or brought them along the way. You may not know this, but the Chief's office doesn't have security cameras in it, so that would be a fairly good place to commit a crime. Either one must have requested to meet each other in the Chief's Office, and Lauren planned to kill Bajj there. It's as simple as that." You retort, "Wait a minute! What about a motive? You've haven't brought one up since we started!" Magnifi explains, "As for that, I'm not certain... Perhaps Bajj was suspicious about Lauren having committed a crime of some kind, and then Lauren tried to steal the documents pertaining to that crime." You ask, "Why are you so insistent on Lauren trying to steal documents?" Before Magnifi can reply, Chief Bridges explains, "It's because some of my documents got messed with. When I got to my office, one of my drawers was open and a certain file had relocated itself to my desk... I just assumed I had moved it without thinking when I found it though..." "I see," you reply, "What document was this? If it was moved on the night of the crime, maybe it has something to do with the murder. Magnifi glares at you, "Really? If you think so, why don't you figure out which document it was. Surely your 'perfect investigation' has brought up an answer by now." "Alright, fine. I'll guess I'll take a guess."

    Which document could be important to the crime?
    PRESENT evidence.
    Evidence is on page 1.

    {{Important Note: Plan things out, because this update ended up kind of messed up since I didn't do that.

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    Present the documents on the Evidence Room Thefts.
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