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Thread: The Pioneer Prophecy [Construction Session]

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    Zee Captain |Sky9| NightingVale's Avatar
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    The Pioneer Prophecy [Almost Ready] (3/8)


    Spoiler: Lore 

    Spoiler: Overline 

    Spoiler: Factions 

    Spoiler: Rules 

    Spoiler: Sign-up Sheet 

    Spoiler: The Lord's Approvals 

    Spoiler: Character Listing 

    Spoiler: Map 


    Constructive criticism is welcomed.
    Comments, concerns, and questions will be answered here.

    Okay, I did some more work on the lore. If it's not enough, I can go more in-depth, if you'd like. Hello! I will be starting this very soon! Send me apps via PM or post on this thread, doesn't matter. This rpg is ready to rumble, and expect to see the thread in the Arena soon!
    Last edited by |Sky9| NightingVale; February 7th, 2014 at 05:01 PM. Reason: we're ready to start!
    Spoiler: Zignahchur 

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    Re: The Pioneer Prophecy [Construction Session]

    Well, it is a pretty good idea I think. Just needs a little work on the story in general.
    Spoiler: chainy thing 

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    Re: The Pioneer Prophecy [Construction Session]

    I REALLY like this. Genetic experiment characters are &&&&ing great, you can bet that I'll throw a character your way.

    I agree the story needs a bit more, like some more backstory and maybe just a taste of what's to come.

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    Re: The Pioneer Prophecy [Construction Session]

    Thanks for the feedback, I'll see what I can do.

    Edit: I've made some somewhat-major changes to the lore, and added a map.
    Also, I've added a faction thingiemabob.
    Last edited by |Sky9| NightingVale; November 8th, 2013 at 12:20 PM.
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    Re: The Pioneer Prophecy [Construction Session]

    Looks a lot better.
    Another question, do any of us initially remember their pasts or does everyone get it back later on?
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    Re: The Pioneer Prophecy [Construction Session]

    Quote Originally Posted by Greenmaster17 View Post
    Looks a lot better.
    Another question, do any of us initially remember their pasts or does everyone get it back later on?
    The latter.
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    Re: The Pioneer Prophecy [Construction Session]

    This is actually pretty good. I'm thinking of an app, but can I ask for a bit more back story into the Factions? You can't just remember what it's like randomly--that'll just leave everything up to the characters and one description will definitely be different from another.


    Spoiler: Quotes, May 2015 (The Splatoon testfire's first hour in a nutshell) 

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    Re: The Pioneer Prophecy [Construction Session]

    Quote Originally Posted by Koopario View Post
    This is actually pretty good. I'm thinking of an app, but can I ask for a bit more back story into the Factions? You can't just remember what it's like randomly--that'll just leave everything up to the characters and one description will definitely be different from another.
    Sure. I'll start working on the faction lore.
    Spoiler: Zignahchur 

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    Re: The Pioneer Prophecy [Construction Session]

    Now this one's interesting. All the questions I would've had have been answered (after the revisions, at least) and I like the way you've divided and presented things. Looks to be quite promising, so I'll be approving this.

    Approvals: 1/2

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    Re: The Pioneer Prophecy [Construction Session]

    all good in the hood
    Approvals: 2/2

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    Re: The Pioneer Prophecy [Construction Session]

    Spoiler: app 
    Spoiler: chainy thing 

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    Re: The Pioneer Prophecy [Construction Session]

    Quote Originally Posted by Greenmaster17 View Post
    Spoiler: app 

    Accepted!
    Be aware that you may want to change this when I finish the lore.

    Also, I've edited my app and made the map slightly better.
    Spoiler: Zignahchur 

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    Re: The Pioneer Prophecy [Construction Session]

    ... That's a legitimate stamp of approval. Dynawing and Lenore should use some of those.
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    Re: The Pioneer Prophecy [Construction Session]

    Well, I've sent an app privately, so...may as well show it here to get it up.

    Spoiler: Antone Cloud Kruse 

    Chances are I'll change factions a bit if there's any inconsistency.


    Spoiler: Quotes, May 2015 (The Splatoon testfire's first hour in a nutshell) 

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    Re: The Pioneer Prophecy [Construction Session]

    Sorry guys! A lot of stuff has been happening in real life, and I haven't been able to get on these forums recently... However, time is freeing up and I can get back on more!

    Quote Originally Posted by Koopario View Post
    Well, I've sent an app privately, so...may as well show it here to get it up.

    Spoiler: Antone Cloud Kruse 

    Chances are I'll change factions a bit if there's any inconsistency.


    Also, be aware that guns have yet to be restored to it's previous modern levels, so don't make any guns super accurate or well-made. They're sort've in between American Revolution times and current times. Guns can, and will overheat if use it too much in too many intervals, and a few might even explode in your hands.

    Also, I've added more information to the lore and edited my profile. If you want more historical lore, I can add that in. I've just mostly explained the current situation of the faction, their gov't and stuff like that, and how they formed.
    Last edited by |Sky9| NightingVale; January 25th, 2014 at 07:55 PM. Reason: i'ma merge my double-post
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    Re: The Pioneer Prophecy [Construction Session]

    Color me interested. I'll have an app up soon.

    EDIT: Whoop, sorry for the late addition of the character sheet.
    Considering I sent the PM a week ago, I have no excuses.

    Spoiler: To tie up loose ends 
    Last edited by Coffee; February 14th, 2014 at 02:55 AM.
    Guess what?

    You're great.

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    Re: The Pioneer Prophecy [Construction Session]

    Alerting all pioneers! We have reached a number of 4 players, so we can begin! Expect to see the thread in the Arena shortly.
    Thanks for joining!
    Spoiler: Zignahchur 

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